Sadly the review meetings focused on document structure instead of thoughtful software design and analysis. ADA didn't help; it was cumbersome to get working well, and ADA experience in the contracting agencies was low. The waterfall approach made the projects slow to implement.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/DOD-STD-2167A?wprov=sfti1

Via Edward Tufte

"Probably the best statistical graphic ever drawn, this map by Charles Joseph Minard portrays the losses suffered by Napoleon’s army in the Russian campaign of 1812. Beginning at the Polish-Russian border, the thick band shows the size of the army at each position. The path of Napoleon’s retreat from Moscow in the bitterly cold winter is depicted by the dark lower band, which is tied to temperature and time scales."

In fact, the latter is the opposite of terseness. LLMs love to tell you what things are not way more than people do.

See https://www.blakestockton.com/dont-write-like-ai-1-101-negat...

(The irony that I started with "it's not just" isn't lost on me)

But an LLM wouldn't write "It's not just X, it's the Y and Z". No disrespect to your writing intended, but adding that extra clause adds just the slightest bit of natural slack to the flow of the sentence, whereas everything LLMs generate comes out like marketing copy that's trying to be as punchy and cloying as possible at all times.

"Moment Engineering by Moment Technology wants to access your {GitHub account name} account Personal user data Email addresses (read-only), profile information (read-only) This application will be able to read your private email addresses and read your private profile information."