Thanks, this helps. I hope you understand tho that it can be hard for me to shift my linguistics in a day but I will definitely try to take this into account if I ever write professionally.

I like writing in HN because its fun & spontaneous. Some people write really crafted messages and I love reading those too :D but I am not sure if I might enjoy the site without such spontaneity, but I also liked reading how you trimmed my message and thinking process behind it. So no guarantees but I have favourited this comment for reading it whenever I want :D

I feel this comment can/will definitely help me in professional writing contexts, something which I struggle with. [In concising what I want to say]

This suggestion is helpful. Do you have any normal blogs I can read about this or something to read/learn more in my free-time?

Also, I definitely appreciate you taking time out of your day to write this message so have a nice day!